Les I gave it a listen. Do you want my opinion? Thanks, I thought you would. It is boring. Repetitive. Without musical skills by the musicians themselves and the guy that mixed it sucks at his job. It sounds tinny at best and has terrible vibes. Even the brief interlude in the middle doesn't offer any dynamics of musicianship and that's what an instrumental MUST do! It's musical garbage IMO. I don't mean to poo poo your offering and I should hate myself for doing it, but you offered it with comments about how good it was so I took that a license to counter. It sucks man. If you like it more power to you though.
You offered 5 minutes of boredom. On the other hand, if you want to hear an instrumental worthy of listening to, just VERY talented musicians playing their asses off for nearly 25 minutes . . . .